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jonge

goh, tis net of heb ik die gitaar eerder gehoord hahahaha

maar serieus he, waar is je smerige filth muziek?

Flamingweeny responds:

lol die gitaar is standaard van Reason...crack ding maar goed...check youtoooob

wrong genre

nice try, but this rythem is nothing like dubstep.

NanvanNoord responds:

Which genre do you suggest then?

its not dubstep

i quote a previous review, and its up to you if you take it as a compliment or an insult.

"This song is like a fresh salad with all the fixin's fresh'n crispy, cool and juicy."

its so.... not.... dubstep.

SantaBro responds:

Read the song description before you post things like this.

-wannabe skrillex

a bit too obviously based on skrillex.

its very unoriginal.

still i bet you had tons of fun making this :)

skill: 9
originality: 5

Rukkus responds:

of course i love skrillex. and Immitating his style is a form of flattery. Not disrespect. im glad i got a 9 in the skill area lol.

ok then ill tell you

whats missing in this supposed dubstep song is...

a proper wobble

ReklessCreati0n responds:

There is pleanty of wobbles in this song, you need to get some better speakers, appreciate the work that goes into these songs, and learn a bit about music. Dubstep doesnt have to be a dirty sounding song. This is a minimal dubstep song, not a dirty song. Learn about music before lo reviewing shit cause your ignorant.

Done.

hifjeioafe

the bird is an owl

the dual tone wobb is nice, although i'd vary the rate a bit to keep it fresh

janiev responds:

Yeah, thats the bird sound you hear. :P But that isn't the sound I mean, I mean the sound that goes with the main lead through out the sound.
Thanks for the review!

titititititititititit

try making the paino sound more organic, just make them louder/softer were u feel it fits, and the up/down pitched tone needs adjusting, its not the right tone.

and i'd make the drums smaller in the beginning
and i feel its a bit too fast

all and all, it definitly does not capture the feeling of the film!
but i dont think that was even the intention

but i like the song all toghether.

LuigiSounds responds:

Great review, i have to agree with you.
Though it was my intention to make it a bit faster than the origional.
I'll work on getting the "wahwah" thingy a bit better, but I cant really seem to get the right noise.

Thanks for your support :)

poopie birds

first of all...

i think a studio version of this would be awesome

but u bring nothing new... the chord progression, the guitar strumming is all done over and over. to stand out, you need something unique. (and im missing a guitar-solo)

the whispering is a nice touch, but try to tweak the effect so it sounds better.
the echo is pretty nice, sounds great with the screaming, although it comes so sudden, like wtf did that come from... maybe u can increase the amount of the effect from zero up to the level u want it. like a fade-in (dont know if thats possible)

and the left-right pan effect is outright annoying.
and try to keep the mic distance to your mouth the same at all times! there are some volume issues there.

havent listened to the lyrics really, topic is w/e to me :)

on newgrounds standards you earn a 10/10 5/5

i really like this

bigbeek responds:

well we are working on a studio version now

yes i can make it a fade in echo effect which is exactly did :D thank you very much :)

jo buu1033 x ww

its ... well the audio levels are just not atune, the singing comes 100% out of the left speaker, while its nicer to have it mid. the singing i suppose to be comical, otherwise its just bad. the synth melody is stupid.

but it does have something....its entertaining.

ILIKEVIDEOGAMES responds:

sorry, i really need to fix the voice thing thats strange that i let that get by me

and the synth melody is literally a direct copy of the song "bottoms up" by keke palmer

pink is my favourite color

yeah the fuzzbass is a bit too fuzzy

the song is too long compared to the variation through out the rest of the track.

in the bass-line you hit 2x a note, then 2x same note an octave lower, that was a bit too low for my taste (but unlike others, i wont grade on personal taste issues)

the chill / more intensive parts dont connect as well as they could.

(you dont need to hear about all the good things again :P)

on newgrounds standard i give you 9/10 5/5

boney-man responds:

lol thanks
although i do not wish to be rated based on the NG standard, I want you to be honest :D

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