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[CBT Vol. 2 - 05 SteadyShock]

howdeedoodledeedimdabbadub

every so often @ when a new bar begins... its laggs or something..

if you recorded it live, made some loops and put the loops after eachother.
well the hard thing about that is that the beginning of the loop has to be exactly acurate. you want the loop to begin with sound instantly. or you get this tiny gaps in your song wich really throw people off.

if this isnt recorded, maybe you didnt use "snap to grid" and placed some of the sequence bars just a bit to far to the right, wich would explain the tiny gaps also.

i'd give a 9 for this... but the gaps are worth -1 so that leaves you with an 8 because its all 'n all a good song.

not bad a score for a song with errors like that, trust me. and it shouldnt be hard to fix. so that would be well worth the effort.

ill check back and vote after you fixed

CobraProductions responds:

Yeah, I've noticed that too, but when i tried to eliminate the gaps they got bigger... so i don't know what to do about them, but most of the time I'd have to slow it down (a lot) to hear them.

[#6 Ocean Cruise - ShadowSport]

hello

you cant go and just repeat the same thing over and over...

adding/leaving some layers just isnt enough to keep it interesting

i wanna hear more chord progression, variation in chords, more intstruments if possible and a hell of alot more melodious variation.

the bassguitar sounds good

ShadowSport responds:

This is helping me alot.
Thank you.

[The World Below Ours]

greetations

its not quite classical, but fuck it :)

i like it, nice progression, good beats

5/5 9/10

i'd give 10/10 if you would replace the copperworks

(i cheat on my classical submissions too :P)

AudioVision responds:

Lawlz it's funny cuzz you know the copperworks secret :P

[Static Violins]

hi!

quite a first submission

i like the name suits it perfectly :)

nice work on volume change, its a nice touch.

only thing i just gotta nag about is.... the chord progression wich is done over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over......

by so many artists... in so many songs.... and sticking to it throughout the whole song
(and putting the chords in a different key doesnt count, the progression stays the same)

overall lovely song 5/5 9/10

noisebug responds:

Thanks for the great feedback. Will def improve there next time!

[Epic Breakdown]

oh no, i mean really.... NO!

this is horrible

its incoherent, horrible drumsamples, and the weird synth notes just random shit wtf!? i was hoping just the intro was stupid, but then the song just doesnt start, but instead i only hear weird noise that isnt the slightest bit interresting to listen to...

rly.... try to make a ~~~~>!SONG!<~~~~ next time, pls dont fuck with mankind with this abomination of music, really, better just stay away from music all together.

or die

xsnrgman responds:

Sorry you feel this way but I could care less personally. I didn't like it too much myself either. I felt I could do a lot better. It's not a reflection of what I feel my music is about. I'd rather play guitar and record that with a decent drum sampler and bass sampler. Until I have that setup, I'll try to put out better FL tracks and other music app tracks. Don't take this submission too personally. I didn't put it on here to annoy anyone or make anyone feel bad. I merely have the freedom to do as I please.

[Underearth (KingT)]

hello

this song sounds like you were drilling ass haha

no its ok

KingTornadoTalon911 responds:

Heh-heh.....Thanks...

Thanks for tha response, too!!

[Blue brass of the beast]

my jaw dropped

just gimme a sec to pick it up...

well u get the idea

hopeku responds:

Yep!

Thanks!

[Congrats_Rockmonix]

pachabel canon rip-off

pachabel canon rip-off...

but nice to listen to

Rockmonix responds:

Hmm, thanks for the semi compliment but perhaps you'r thinking of a different arrangement because Pachelbel's Canon is not even remotely similar to this. Unless you consider using orchestral instruments ripping off a classical piece in which case I'm not sure what else to do to avoid that in the future.